OC's Lineart Practice

just practicing some lineart. right now I am working on coloring them, but... well it isn't turning out the way I want it. can't really explain the problem, it just...doesn't look right to me. I am kinda liking the lineart better than the colored version. oh well, guess I will just have to keep working on it

I love how the lineart of the girl turned out, just wish the colored version would turn out.